My first book's gone to something like this:
|Okay, so it's not nearly this good--I love Nighthawks. Plus my book's fantasy. Ah, well.|
When the original looked something like this:
|Okay, my original didn't have many Legos, and there were bad accents, and a completely pointless center...but you get the idea|
Soon I'll get to revisions! Just...it's bumpy right now, and nobbly, so I know I've got my work cut out for me...but hey! My first draft of a book is one day away from done!